My name is Daniela and I like write english.
I am A2 level and I want to became B1 .
Unfortunally I make some mistakes when I write.
Can you help me?
this is one of my writing:
Title: CHILD'S DEVELOPMENT
> If we are speaking about children's development towards scholastic results it is true that teaching children at home could have more results than teaching them at school.
> Nevertheless the last assertion is true we must admit how many reasons there are in teaching at school. In fact, children need to spend time in relationships and second they should have someone to compare themselves.
> On the other hand teaching at home could give more attention towards what child is studying and this can give more positive results.
> As conclusion we could say that it is important that children carry on to go to school.