My retell of episode of serial "Peppa Pig"
Hi there :-)
I'm beginner in learning English. I try to write retells of episodes of "Peppa Pig" serial. I do it for improve my writing skills. And today I worked hard and I wrote retell of an episode named "Very Hot Day". If you have a couple of free minutes, please read this text. Of course. I will be very glad to read any your coments. Especially, about mistakes.
It was usual summer day and very hot weather. The whole piggie's family came out from the house. Peppa and George saw muddy puddles near house and they decided to jump up and down there. Unfortunately, all muddy puddles dried completely under the sun. Peppa and George disliked it and came back to Parents. Mammy suggested kids should swim in the paddling pool instead. Peppa and George agreed with it because they liked to swim in the paddling pool very much. Further, we can see that Mammy suggested everyone had to have some suncream on skin because the sun was very hot. Meanwhile Daddy take out the paddling pool form the house. In a short while the paddling pool became ready for kids and they could swim in it.
In the next part of this episode we can see how Miss Rabbit appeared near piggie's house. She worked as ice cream seller. Mammy decided to buy some ice cream to the whole family. George liked dinosaurs very much and Miss Rabbit gave him a dinosaur-shaped ice lolly. George was very happy. Unfortunately, George didn't eat his icecream fast and it melted and fell down on the ground. George burst into tears. "Never mind, George" said Mammy and gave him Daddy's ice cream.
Finally, we can see that Mammy and kids came back to Daddy and saw that he fell asleep under the sun. They were afraid that he got a sunstroke. They tipped the whole water in the paddling pool on Daddy to cool him down. Daddy woke up immediately and he felt well. Luckly, new muddy puddles appeared after splosh and kids rushed to house and wore thier boots and started to jump up and down in the muddy puddles
This story is ended.
Link on this episode on Youtube: (deleted. Unfortunately, I amn't able to post links)