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"The April rain, the April rain,
Comes slanting down in fitful showers,
Then from the furrow shoots the grain,
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And in grey shawl and woodland bowers
The cuckoo through the April rain
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Grammar Correction for a Note

derickderick Posts: 2
edited November 2017 in Questions
Please help to correct grammar following travel note as following format.



27.10.2017
I Started my travelling at 9.00 AM from Trincomalee and I reached Batticaloa at 13.30 PM and I reached at my Temporary resident place at 13.45 PM

28.10.2017
I Started My Travelling at 7.00AM and I reached NSB Kalmunai Branch at 8.15 AM.
I finished My training at 16.00 PM and I got bus to Batticaloa at 17.15 PM and I reached my temporary resident place at 18.30 PM

29.10.2017
I stated my travelling at 9.00AM from Batticaloa and I reached Trincomalee at 13.30 PM and I reached my resident place at 13.45 PM
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  • mheredgemheredge Teacher Here and therePosts: 31,101 mod
    In all your sentences you use two 'ands.' You need to avoid this by using two sentences @derick.


    I started travelling at 9.00 AM from Trincomalee and reached Batticaloa at 13.30 PM. I reached at my temporary residence at 13.45 PM


    I started travelling at 7.00AM and reached NSB Kalmunai Branch at 8.15 AM.
    I finished my training at 16.00 PM and got a bus to Batticaloa at 17.15 PM. I reached my temporary residence at 18.30 PM

    I started travelling at 9.00AM from Batticaloa and reached Trincomalee at 13.30 PM, arriving at my residence at 13.45 PM.
  • derickderick Posts: 2
    Thank you Meherdge.
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